Recent Critiques
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September 2nd, 2009 at 4:31 pm
this is so nice and funny and cool si lolo…
September 3rd, 2009 at 3:13 pm
i love this…i miss my lolo who just passed away…
September 3rd, 2009 at 3:17 pm
heartwarming… love the last scene.(:
September 3rd, 2009 at 4:23 pm
may kurot sa puso. the essence of being in a “Filipino family” is captured in this clip. how each apo cares for his lolo and vice versa.not a second of your time is wasted when you watch this clip.parehas kami ni cocodog_21, when i watched this clip.i remembered my lolo who never fails to buy softdrinks (Jazz Cola) for his apos everytime we visit him.kudos to the director and the rest of the guys who made this!
September 4th, 2009 at 12:25 am
I like the simplicity!
September 4th, 2009 at 9:01 am
simple yet kewl..
September 7th, 2009 at 3:29 am
I love it. no pretense. Hindi kailangang maglalim-laliman. A simple story told in a very simple way which made the message came across. Ayos to! Hindi overrated! Magaling! Vote for this film!
September 7th, 2009 at 3:51 am
heartwarming. solid visuals. good luck!
September 8th, 2009 at 11:43 am
How I wish nag abot pa kami ne grandady….pusong pinoy talaga…nice 1.
September 9th, 2009 at 5:00 am
this is one of the best three films in this site. I hope the FDCP will find a way to find out if some are just power-voting. this film should make it to the cut.
Yung iba dinadaan lang sa dami ng comments na pare-pareho lang ang mga tao at halos wala namang masabi about the film they are giving comments on. Go for Breakfast with Lolo!!!!
September 13th, 2009 at 9:39 am
nice film …. nakakaiyak naman… lalo na nung una kase maliit lang ung pinakain dun sa lolo… dapat lamang nating ibigay kung anu man ang gusto ng mga grandparentz natin co’z you dont know kung kailan sila malalagutan ng hininga at kung kailan nila makakasama si Lord … Kaya nice film !
September 14th, 2009 at 4:31 pm
my heart has been pierced. a story told in 3 mins! solid. galing!
September 17th, 2009 at 3:00 pm
i finished watching the film with a smile on my face and a tear threatening to fall from the corner of my eye. this is so heartwarming.. love it
September 23rd, 2009 at 6:57 pm
Vote for breakfast with Lolo, Five and MR. Perfect!
September 26th, 2009 at 5:36 pm
Apat ang gusto ko na VERY POSSITIVE ang message…BREAD OF LIFE, TAKBO, SA LAOT NG PANGARAP, at BREAKFAST NI LOLO! IBOTO ANG MGA ITO!!!!!
September 26th, 2009 at 7:05 pm
Sana magkaroon tayo ng love sa ating lolo’t lola.
September 27th, 2009 at 11:44 pm
make our oldies happy for they spend only shorter time…
September 28th, 2009 at 2:19 am
nice food for lolo…
December 20th, 2009 at 12:58 pm
to all the semi-finalists,
Congrats sa ‘tin guys for making it to the semi-finals. This really is fun. If you guys need or will need help for future projects, nandito lang ako.
The only thing that will bind us, filmmakers and enthusiasts, is the commonality that we all wanna share something.
Jeff of A Glitch
December 24th, 2009 at 11:58 am
Veryu touching naman ito. We should luv our lolas ang lolos.
December 24th, 2009 at 3:55 pm
Christmas is not only sold in stores, wrapped in colorful papers, sealed in an envelope, pulled out of a jar, or freshly-baked from the oven. It is not only a state of mind. It is the spirit that binds us – where war becomes peace, and hunger becomes prosperity. Where every story becomes a love story. The time of oneness. The time we all pray and dine together, the time we share. Some will go on separate ways, will walk on different roads. But in the end, the spirit carries on, and all roads lead home.
December 26th, 2009 at 6:04 pm
agree, touching nga.
December 29th, 2009 at 12:33 am
MAHUSAY NA SHORT
December 29th, 2009 at 3:14 am
luv this…
January 8th, 2010 at 10:00 am
Ok ang story. Puwede sa movie.
January 9th, 2010 at 5:56 pm
Ilan taon na si lolo?
January 10th, 2010 at 9:29 am
The concept is very good. Kaya lng konti votes nito.
January 10th, 2010 at 9:53 am
Cute din ito para sa mga diabetics talaga. Baka supportahan ito ni Gary V.
January 10th, 2010 at 11:14 am
gu2 ko to.
January 10th, 2010 at 2:01 pm
Suggestion ko lang. Sana lahat ng entries may premyo kahit 20 pesos lang. For the effort baga.
January 10th, 2010 at 3:11 pm
Dayaan naman dito yung HABILIN obvious na hakot ang votes.
January 10th, 2010 at 8:55 pm
Bigyang pansin ng mga diabetic daw. BOboto rito mga langgam hahaha.
January 11th, 2010 at 11:01 am
Maganda raw topic nito sabi ng prof ko. Puwede na nga.
January 11th, 2010 at 3:41 pm
View nyo rin po ito sabi ng doctor namin. Magandang movie daw ito para sa health ng tao. Eh kaso commercial lang yata ng pancake ito hahaha.
January 12th, 2010 at 11:31 am
My score is 90.
January 13th, 2010 at 2:53 am
Ang galing! Nakakatuwa.
May mga nag-i-score base on
their own criteria. Sali ako dyan. Gawan natin ng rubric para mas masaya. Eto ginawa kong rubric, sana makatulong:
CINEMATOGRAPHY:
10-9-8 7-6-5 4-3-2 1
creative and proper lighting/angles/camera motion
w/o appearing profound/pilit; has continuity with day/night/scene
POST PROD:
10-9-8 7-6-5 4-3-2 1
Clean/original/creative mix of musical score and foley;Clean continuity of cut-to-cut editing;Or relevant use of special fx/cgi/graphics; Editing style is just enough for the story w/o appearing profound;
rhythmic and dictates the tempo of the film.
PROD DESIGN:
10-9-8 7-6-5 4-3-2 1
Appropriateness of wardrobe/make-up/props/set design/
continuity and consistency
SCREENPLAY:
10-9-8 7-6-5 4-3-2 1
Excellent concept with a good premise(s) and smooth
transitioning of sequences that help build up the emotion of the story; Lines are quirky or witty; Originality in storyline. Story, values or message clearly achieves its intent. Experiments on the elements of time/setting/mood/tempo of the story.Characters are likable if not lovable; SHOULD still touch the heart, even after all those times it
touched and stimulated the audiences’ mind;
TREATMENT:
10-9-8 7-6-5 4-3-2 1
Creatively directed and interpreted the script or story without compromising its originality, wittiness, values, intentions, and most especially it’s UNIQUE
SELLING POINT; Appreciated through both common/simple
understanding and intellectual expectations;
Add all scores then add 50 to get the Equivalent.
Example: 47 + 50 = 97 (Score)
Jeffreyholic of A Glitch
January 13th, 2010 at 9:07 am
Nice yan Jeff. PEro di pa ko makadecide kc di ko pa watch lahat entries.
January 13th, 2010 at 10:55 am
Hirap mag-score kasi dapat magaling ka.
January 13th, 2010 at 11:17 am
Kunsabagay si Nakupo lang ang magaling dito hehehe. Pero mahirap nga sundin yang guide ni Jeffreyholic kasi very complex.
January 13th, 2010 at 1:33 pm
BREAKFAST WITH LOLO puwede sigurong maging BREAK WITH LOLO kasi para hwag lumala ang sakit hahaha. Pag nahuli nung tatay na manager naku magiging FAST WITH LOLO kasi tatakbo sila hahaha.
January 13th, 2010 at 9:24 pm
Ikaw talaga nakupo baka pag nagalit si idol Popo gawin ka nyang BREAK NECK hahahaha.
January 14th, 2010 at 1:23 pm
my score based on Jeffreyholic’s Criteria
CINEMATOGRAPHY- 7
POSPROD- 7
PROD DESIGN- 7
SCREENPLAY- 8
TREATMENT- 8
37+50
TOTAL- 87
January 14th, 2010 at 8:49 pm
That 87 rating of GRUDGE is very agreeable. The topic is the sign of the time. Diabetes is a killer, mind you. The connivance of the Grandfather and the Grandson was very touching. And to think that pancake syrup is deadly for diabetics for it may cause hyperglycemia, I guess this one deserves to be on the big screen.
January 16th, 2010 at 11:27 pm
Touching naman kasi ang short na ito. galing.
January 17th, 2010 at 6:03 pm
Wow taas ng rating nito. In fairness naman kasi magandang topic din ito to discuss.
January 18th, 2010 at 9:21 am
Sa awarding sana invited lahat ng sumali para ma-meet ko mga finalists.
January 18th, 2010 at 4:05 pm
Feel ko mananalo ito kasi magaling cast parang actors talaga lalo na yung tatay na naka-necktie. Ang galing umakting.
January 19th, 2010 at 4:52 pm
Kahit yata yung mga diabetics hindi bumoto d2. Kawawa ka rin gaya nung nilangaw na entry. Ask mo mga cyber friends mo dahil sayang ang entry mo na ito. Maganda. honest yan maganda talaga. Matutuwa ako pag nanalo ka ng jury prize. Wag ka na umasa sa peoples choice dahil pulpol ang mga pipol d2 hahahaha.
January 19th, 2010 at 9:13 pm
In my list this is one entry that deserves a special award for diabetes awareness.
January 20th, 2010 at 9:33 pm
Diabetes awareness. Ganda tunog hehehe. Matutuwa si Lolo. Baka magblow out si Apo hahaha.
January 21st, 2010 at 12:47 am
88/100
January 21st, 2010 at 6:26 am
Wakit wala yung Arca? Galing rating niya kumpleto winners. Cguro judge xa. Ito naman super ere 88 daw. Kala ko ba sabi jan special award lang?
January 21st, 2010 at 9:13 am
86 pts.
January 21st, 2010 at 11:11 am
Dami na mga scorer dito. Don
January 21st, 2010 at 2:17 pm
85 is a good score for this entry.
January 21st, 2010 at 5:41 pm
Hindi po ba nagawi d2 si Alexis? AY wala hahaha. Iskoran nyo naman itong kay Lolo para magblow out siya ng pancake hahaha.
January 21st, 2010 at 8:52 pm
Hahaha looking for love.
January 22nd, 2010 at 9:32 pm
I find some ratings agreeable and some are absurd. In fairness to all entries I think the lowest mark is 78 at least.
January 23rd, 2010 at 9:42 am
Sa tingin nyo pass o fail ito?
January 23rd, 2010 at 11:29 am
Passing ito. Kasama si lolo sa senior awarding pati si smoking lolo at si lola turban. No worry naman kasi ako ang caregiver hehehe.
January 23rd, 2010 at 1:48 pm
Pasado ito. Malaki nga chance for a prize.
January 24th, 2010 at 12:38 pm
Touching ang story. Mahusay pagkagawa.
January 25th, 2010 at 10:21 am
Best actor yung father na executive. Kamukha ko kasi hehehe.
January 25th, 2010 at 10:42 pm
I’ll go with the trend of issuing an opinion on the entries. The topic is worthwhile and with value at least for the health. The video shots are good and artistic enough. The actors are great with their acting.
January 26th, 2010 at 9:59 am
Sana gawing movie ito. May naisip akong magandang ending na hindi malungkot.
January 26th, 2010 at 12:41 pm
THIS ONE IS GREAT!
January 27th, 2010 at 12:27 am
Wish you luck!
January 27th, 2010 at 12:27 am
sana manalo ito!
January 27th, 2010 at 12:19 pm
Si Nakupo iniba pa ang pangalan ginawa pang Sosyalera hehehe. Buking ka na sister wahehehe.
January 27th, 2010 at 12:44 pm
I’m glad that the even is finally comin’ to it’s culmination. Congratulations to all of you.
The sharing of comments and criticisms here is definitely remarkable. Very very healthy. Lalo na sa amin na sumusubaybay at naaaliw sa mga commento at entries nyo.
I’ll be honest with you guys, still saddening pa din kasi halos lahat ng entries na pumasok sa Finals ay very formulaic. Ganun pa din. Magagandang concept, pero walang story-telling platform. Magagandang expositions ang nilalatag pero sa huli, mangugulat lang na “ganun naman pala.” I just don’t see it as good story-telling. Hindi linear. I know it is really challenging to compress and tell a story in 3 min. Most docu would end up na walang wrap-up, sayang tuloy ang intention. Yung iba nagmumukhang music-video tuloy.The same applies with Narrative, nagiging isang malaking “what if?” or “eto ang concept” Then you will ask your self, ano ang istorya. 3 min really best apply to an experimental.
Anyway, the best thing about this is that you all took the challenge. Some excelled in some aspects and some did not. once again, congrats and see you guys sa awardings.
January 28th, 2010 at 8:21 am
Culmionation na nga po. Congrats sa winners.
January 28th, 2010 at 3:31 pm
Mananalo eto pag parehas judges kase minsan sa contest dayaan den po.
January 30th, 2010 at 2:00 am
Congrats sa lahat ng winners. Nagpay-off din lahat ng pinaghirapan.
Too bad mine did not make it. Huhuhu!
But that’s alright. Do you guys think the organizers will allow us, those who did not make it, or I could just be speaking for my self, to attend the awarding and meet you guys?
Again, congrats and many thanks to all of you.